#MeToo - US Navy Sailor Harassed After Witnessing An Admiral Sexually Assault A Female Shipmate

godofwine

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Commander Louise Edwards knew she was a good sailor. Her service record spoke for itself. Second in her class at Annapolis, first in her class at Navy War College. She had received countless accommodations, and numerous medals, but at the moment none of that mattered.

She had told the truth.

The Bible said, “And the truth shall set you free.” But had it? Admiral Shultzmiller was a bad man, a bad leader, and, more importantly was one of the biggest Good Ole Boys in the Good Old Boy Network. He had crossed the line - grabbing the behind of a young female Ensign - and he was so arrogant as to do it in front of her.

The Ensign came to her crying, saying how helpless she felt being groped by this man more than twice her age and a thousand times more powerful. The Ensign asked her to testify on her behalf and she agreed.

The result, her skyrocketing career skidded to a halt. Her orders to COMSUBLANT were cancelled, supposedly due to budget cuts, and she'd received her first and second bad FITREP of her 12-year career.

While once told that she was a shoe-in for Captain, she wasn’t even recommended for board the past two years. These were the worst two years of her life, and though she had done the right thing, her life was miserable.

The Navy was her life. As a female officer, having a family was looked at as a hinderance to a career. Having babies to her male superiors meant she wasn’t available, and couldn’t be counted on.

Instead of feelings of post-coital bliss, Louise sat half-naked on the edge of the hotel bed, her mind drifting to the last 2 years of her now floundering Navy career.

“Louise?”

The young man’s voice snatched her from the pool of self-pity she had been wallowed in. A smile played across her lips as she splashed down into the beauty of her new reality.

“Hey, you,” she said, her eyes running up and down her playmate. Just the sight of him standing there made the juices return to her loins. 6’1”, chocolate brown, built like a linebacker, and his manhood stood straight out - all ten inches in full salute.

She needed someone, so she had found someone. A college junior, and on the football team, no less. They had played two sessions, and his rock-hard member seemed to be aiming for a third round. She had hoped she had it in her.

This was the most fun she’d had in her 35 years. 15 years difference was a lot, but she hadn’t planned on keeping him, only playing with him for a little bit.

“You were amazing, you know that?” he said as he sat down next to her, cupped her breast and kissed her neck.”

Almost as amazing as you. My God, what you do with your fingers...your tongue...and that...ooh. I don’t remember guys in college knowing any of that? Where did you learn it?” she asked in jest. “No, I don’t want to know. I’m just going to enjoy the fringe benefits.”

“It doesn’t matter. I'm wasn't gonna tell you anyway. Do you have another in you?” he said?

"Only if you can let me ride this time,” she giggled.

The young man kissed her neck, and as she threw her head back she saw a red light on the dresser, and froze.”

“That light? What, what is…what is that?" she screamed.

"It's nothing. Don't worry about it," he said, still trying to kiss her neck, but she pushed herself free of his grip.

Louise sat up, and her eyes and mind came to witness the reality she had feared when she saw the red light - a camera.

"What are you...," she stammered. "What are you doing?"

The young man stood, naked as the day he was born and said nonchalantly, "Oh that. It's a project."

Her eyes were wide with horror.

The young man walked over to the camera, picked it up and turned it off. "I think I have enough."

Young man took a picture of the woman as she sat naked on the bed, feebly trying to cover herself with her hands but couldn't. She stuttered, "You just...you just."

“Oh, by junior. I'm a junior in high school. I’m only 16, and Admiral Shultzmiller sends his regards. He's going to like this video.”


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Thanks for reading. This isn't real. I entered a writing contest and the theme was, He's Way Too Young For Me. I thought of this scenario with all of the #MeToo sexual assault people coming forward. What happens to those who witness sexual assault or improper fondling?
 

godofwine

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You may be a damn good writer, but you're also an asshole OP, lol! Good shit yo!
:lol:man this shit was like a Law & Order episode in My Mind. It was fun writing though
great job. Makes me want to get back into writing.
You should. Short stories are fun. You can grab a motherfucker quick if you do it right and before they know it they're done
Damn, Bacchus! Shit went from a news story to a page out of a paperback book you'd find in a single chick's purse. :lol:
I wrote this shit spur-of-the-moment like DJ Quik. The writing contest deadline was yesterday at 7 p.m., I started writing it around 9 in the morning.
 

Shadow

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Change 12 years to about 18-20 years for the war college.

Or just change war college to Navy Post Grad, CGSC or a foreign equivalent.

That was the first clue for me. Too quickly moving through key development.

Good writing.'
 

godofwine

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Change 12 years to about 18-20 years for the war college.

Or just change war college to Navy Post Grad, CGSC or a foreign equivalent.

That was the first clue for me. Too quickly moving through key development.

Good writing.'
It's man. I was enlisted. I don't know too much about how the officers move about progressing in their careers. I started the story 7 hours before the deadline so I didn't have time to research, But much thanks. You are an officer?
 

playahaitian

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Damn, Bacchus! Shit went from a news story to a page out of a paperback book you'd find in a single chick's purse. :lol:

that shit f*cked me up @godofwine !!!!!

From Clancy to Shades of Grey to Scandal to ...

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godofwine

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Awww man that was dope
halfway thru the story, i stopped and made popcorn.....like......gotdamn this shit is gettin good.
:lol::roflmao::lol::roflmao:
I've entering these 650 word contests on Writingforums every month since 2014 and I finally got good enough to win one this past March and another last month. I literally came up with the concept from start to finish between 9am and 7pm yesterday.

I'm glad y'all appreciated it. I feel myself getting much better. Hopefully I'll finish End of a Nightmare (my novel) within the next year or so
 
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godofwine

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Well, the story was good, but the judges ultimately graded it in second place. I'm good with it, though. This would have been my 3rd victory of the year after going winless in the previous 2 years of competitions.

It's great practice, and I appreciate you all for letting me experiment on you a bit. The feedback, and the laughs are some of the things that make BGOL great.

Here are the judges comments:

GodofWine
Spelling/Grammar: 4
Tone/Voice: 4
Effect: 9
Overall: 18
Review: Wow. This is making a statement, isn't it? There are so many messages in this piece, and some of them not so black and white. You did well in the few words allowed. You gave us a good description of your MC; her accomplishments and goals, and then bam! You create a situation where she is honor-bound to "tell the truth" of an incident involving a Naval good old boy and a female ensign. Her career then hits the skids. But then! You turn the tables to show that women, and not just men, are capable of indiscretions, of acting badly, of using others. There were a few inconsistencies in word usage, and I think it is better to spell out words, rather than use initials, but I know the word count was an issue. I thought it was well told and extremely timely. Good job!



[6]godofwine
“Sailor Blues"
Spelling/Grammar: 4
Tone/Voice: 4
Effect: 9
Overall: 17

Review: I didn't think this story was going to fit, as I read the opening which seemed like it bit off a lot to chew. It also seemed really talky and telly and summary, but the pace and the level of detail and reader involvement smoothly narrowed and focused into a conclusion which fits the story perfectly. The sexy feels a bit too cliche for the rest -- or vice versa. The whole piece is just a little wishy-washy in search of its exact tone: maybe something to hone in on.



GodofWine
Total: 17

Written pretty solid. I have to say I was not expecting to see the character who's been knocked to the ground at the beginning get kicked at the end. Especially when we don't know what happened to Admiral Gropey for his actions and the results of her testimony.
Tricking somebody into raping a minor (statutory or no) seems like an extreme revenge move for getting pinged on grabbing the ass of a subordinate, especially if he's a Good Ole Boy in a Good Ole Boy Club, what could have possibly happened to him? I can't believe that's a dischargeable offense.
There were a few instances that I felt a lot of information, especially in the beginning if kind of dumped on the reader, but by the second half it finds its pace and goes along fine.
 

Shadow

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Good showing man; it was a very good story. Post yourther stuff on here if you are up for it. I think the fam would appreciate it.
 

godofwine

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Good showing man; it was a very good story. Post yourther stuff on here if you are up for it. I think the fam would appreciate it.
Thanks, man. I usually do post my stuff on here. Maybe I'll release a short story compilation on Amazon and post the link on here
 
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