Feedback | My bullshit ass music video

[Mattapan02126]

1. The title of this thread is nothing more than me using my self-deprecating snese of humor to grab your attention.

2. I think my video is dope but know that it's flawed and just want feedback on it to improve going forward.

3. I'm not the MC in this video but here's his SoundCloud:

https://www.soundcloud.com/rah-spect

I directed and edited this music video and would like some feedback on it. Tell me what you were feeling, what you feel maybe lacking and most importantly, where do you think I can improve?

Premise: Simple, a day in the life presented in a visually interesting manner. Nothing over the top, simple premise.

I know they out there (joke)

But fuck it, you can't get better if you ain't willing to take criticism. Let me know.

 

[GAMBINO]

Dont sell yourself short man. You created something that came from your own brain. Not many people can take the initiative to do something they dream of. You did it and you did it how you see. Never think what you create from your own mind is "bullshit", it's art. Good job by the way. Peace

 

[kuu]

Seems like you stayed in the vein on the track which make sense to me. If your artist has any tracks that have a plot, it would be dope to see how you capture that through the lenses. Brenda's Baby type shit.

Good work brother.



Also, try not to belittle your work because if you enjoy what you're doing, respeck it pleigh boi.

 

[kew]

Not bad... Keep putting in that work

 

[Helico-pterFunk]

Props, fam'. I thought it was good. Do you have any more music videos you can add? We'll check those ones out too ...

 

[RoomService]

6843539

 

[ViCiouS]

good work on the edit - did you story board before shooting and editing?

The one thing that jumps out is you need to work on your camera movement and maybe apply the rule of thirds to some of your compositions

here are 3 vids on movement

 

[Megatron X]

You from mattapan? I use to live in the Pan or Murderpan

 

[CoTtOnMoUf]

much much potential son!

is that you in the vid and did you come up with that beat?

i'm very impressed.

keep that shit up!

 

[g0nbad real bad]

Cool hommie keep up the work

 

[papi68]

Better than most. Really liked the visuals. Respeck yourself and spell your name correctly, plehboi.

 

[PJN]

It was good, don't sell yourself short. This is the kind of hit I'll listen to on my way home from work to get in a good mood.

 

[therealjondoe]

Nice.
Looks good to me
I definitely need to hop on the video game myself.

 

[K Luv]

I see what you did, diss your own video so expectations low and get props instead. Next time believe in your work homie that fake humble stuff won't get you far. Good vid though

 

[casavino]

Directed and edited this music video and would like some feedback on it. Tell me what you were feeling, what you feel maybe lacking and most importantly, where do you think I can improve?

Premise: Simple, a day in the life presented in a visually interesting manner. Nothing over the top, simple premise.

I know they out there

But fuck it, you can't get better if you ain't willing to take criticism. Let me know.

you have a gift

 

[big pimp]

Keep putting in work.

 

[God Dammit]

@Mattapan02126
The vid is dope.
The track is dope.
Is that you rapping?
I like that shit!​

 

[Mattapan02126]

I see what you did, diss your own video so expectations low...

Be self-deprecating is just my sense of humor my g, I wasn't trying to diss my video at all. I know it's flawed but I also know that it's dope. I wouldn't have posted here if I didn't think it was dope. I used the title as an attention grabber.

I posted the music video here for people to offer there opinion on it and tips for the next one. With that said thanks for the opinion from the dudes in the post. Appreciated for real.

Oh to be clear, I just directed, edited and came up with the concept of the video. The MC in the video is not me - he's dope and I'll post his SoundCloud later.

One

 

[therealjondoe]

What type of camera was used?

 

[Mattapan02126]

6843539

Huh?

 

[Megatron X]

Huh?

You from Mattapan. You know of Kaos Crew?

 

[Mattapan02126]

What type of camera was used?

We used a 70D but I went in and altered the settings to get the look I wanted. If your interested there's a DP ( Director of Photography) who had a series with tips on shooting with Canon cameras, can passed that to you if interested.

 

[Mattapan02126]

You from Mattapan. You know of Kaos Crew?

Yup, born and raised off of Bluehill Ave. by Morton St. but currently living in the LBC though

 

[Megatron X]

Yup, born and raised off of Bluehill Ave. by Morton St. but currently living in the LBC though

Cool. I was raised in the Pan at Morton village then moved over to The D then the Bury now South Ending it.

How is Long Beach?

I gotta make another Boston thread for the fam either for the people living in the Bean or who moved away.

 

[Mattapan02126]

Cool. I was raised in the Pan at Morton village then moved over to The D then the Bury now South Ending it.

How is Long Beach?

I gotta make another Boston thread for the fam either for the people living in the Bean or who moved away.

I like it more than LA for sure. Long Beach folk seem down to earth and the section my wife and myself live in ( East Village) is diverse as fuck, major plus.

 

[furlough]

i thought it was cool

but all that woe is me, self doubt bs in your post was wack though

be about the life you choose

 

[Mattapan02126]

i thought it was cool

but all that woe is me, self doubt bs in your post was wack though

be about the life you choose

My G, I thought I cleared this up? There's no self doubt. Title is an attention grabber to have people view the video and give feedback.

 

[The Untouchable GDFOLKS]

Shit looks nice fam,great job

 

[PeerlessMack]

I like it.

Tip for next time: Film at 30fps then slow down to 24fps in post for music videos. Unless you intended you film like that.

 

[blackras9]

Don't head off criticism by doing their job for them. The track was legit. Stay humble, keep grinding.

 

[therealjondoe]

We used a 70D but I went in and altered the settings to get the look I wanted. If your interested there's a DP ( Director of Photography) who had a series with tips on shooting with Canon cameras, can passed that to you if interested.

sure send me a link

 

[Mattapan02126]

sure send me a link

I found a link. Seen it back in 2011 but still solid nonetheless.

 

[Mattapan02126]

I like it.

Tip for next time: Film at 30fps then slow down to 24fps in post for music videos. Unless you intended you film like that.

Thanks my G, my DP shot at 60fps... any ideas on why?

 

[doghouse]

 

[Ill Paragraph]

Peace,

Don't even begin to attach negativity to your effort, even if in jest. Keep that shit away from you.

Anyway, I like it, it's smart and catchy.

You may want to consider changing "Rahspect" to "Rahspeck" you know what I'm saying?