Feedback | My bullshit ass music video

[Mello Mello]

good work on the edit - did you story board before shooting and editing?

The one thing that jumps out is you need to work on your camera movement and maybe apply the rule of thirds to some of your compositions

here are 3 vids on movement

 

[Mrfreddygoodbud]

sounds good to me, wouldve been doper if dude wouldve walked around

the hood, get some shots of everyday people shining through the struggle....

but I like the sound and flow aint bad...

camera work a little stiff..

but overall nice job..

got a lot of talented people on bgol fo real