I need time to gather my thoughts.
I was in the script writing thread late helping my brothers out.

I need time to gather my thoughts.
I was in the script writing thread late helping my brothers out.
Soooo is the shit funny or not...
Im.watching tonight... I wanna laugh
I hope it's funny
Judging from Facebook folks saying its wack
Soooo is the shit funny or not...
Im.watching tonight... I wanna laugh
I hope it's funny
Judging from Facebook folks saying its wack
so how was it?4 mins in and she had already said nigga..more than Dave has said I'm his last 4 specials lol
Ummmm ok
It was great to see her on stage and gawd damn it she looked kinda sexy at times
She has great presence commanding great storyteller funny
The audience LOVES her her fans are LOYAL
but as a stand up?
It was fine I laughed once or twice
Monique was never THAT kind of comedian to me. you know what I mean not a tried and true dedicated stand up.
The cursing went way down at the half way mark but the first about 20 minutes?
Muthafuka nigga what??!!!
It was like the worst stereotypical example of "black stand up" the curses were lazy in their excessive use. I KNOW Mo brand of comedy. I get it trust me. But it was not used as an emphasis or playing a character or to shock or accentuate. She was just cursing to curse.
She needs a new writer. And she needs to rehearse more. Some bits just ran too long without a real good resolution/punchline.
It was not bad it was just regular and what I expected. Nothing more which is really sad because it could/should have been a classic
I honestly dont see why black men on BGOL have a problem with this woman.... she's doing all the things you all claim you want from black women.
She's submissive to her man
She lets him lead her life and career
She follows his lead
She's good at what she does...(whether you like it or not is subjective but but there are actors and comedians who would KILL to have her career credits)
I've never seen her dog black men as a group...she may have issues with individual black men but as a group I've never seen her say or act like black MEN aint shit.
And now she's asking her husband if she can have sex with women (something I'm willing to bet he'll have an ancillary benefit from) and I Charles Barkley guarantee! some of you niggas will find ways to nitpick/hate on it
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Ummmm ok
It was great to see her on stage and gawd damn it she looked kinda sexy at times
She has great presence commanding great storyteller funny
The audience LOVES her her fans are LOYAL
but as a stand up?
It was fine I laughed once or twice
Monique was never THAT kind of comedian to me. you know what I mean not a tried and true dedicated stand up.
The cursing went way down at the half way mark but the first about 20 minutes?
Muthafuka nigga what??!!!
It was like the worst stereotypical example of "black stand up" the curses were lazy in their excessive use. I KNOW Mo brand of comedy. I get it trust me. But it was not used as an emphasis or playing a character or to shock or accentuate. She was just cursing to curse.
She needs a new writer. And she needs to rehearse more. Some bits just ran too long without a real good resolution/punchline.
It was not bad it was just regular and what I expected. Nothing more which is really sad because it could/should have been a classic
Bro real talk the only way I could see Monique is I’d have to be able to see other women too. I mean she probably suck a mean one but who didn’t already think she was a carpet muncher? I said to myself I bet she like pussy more than she like hotdog and most true feminine women LOOOOOVE that mf hotdog! Monique always been masculine!
Mehso how was it?
I agree with everything you said except for the "sexy at times" uhmmm hell naw ...Ummmm ok
It was great to see her on stage and gawd damn it she looked kinda sexy at times
She has great presence commanding great storyteller funny
The audience LOVES her her fans are LOYAL
but as a stand up?
It was fine I laughed once or twice
Monique was never THAT kind of comedian to me. you know what I mean not a tried and true dedicated stand up.
The cursing went way down at the half way mark but the first about 20 minutes?
Muthafuka nigga what??!!!
It was like the worst stereotypical example of "black stand up" the curses were lazy in their excessive use. I KNOW Mo brand of comedy. I get it trust me. But it was not used as an emphasis or playing a character or to shock or accentuate. She was just cursing to curse.
She needs a new writer. And she needs to rehearse more. Some bits just ran too long without a real good resolution/punchline.
It was not bad it was just regular and what I expected. Nothing more which is really sad because it could/should have been a classic
I agree with everything you said except for the "sexy at times" uhmmm hell naw ...
And "great story teller"..she was all over the place..and when she got serious and tried to make a point it just didn't land..
When she came out she was waaay too fired up..like she had just done a whole 8 ball or something..I thought she was going to pass out..she was trying way to hard
But she did calm down in the second half and the old Monique kinda showed up
I give it a solid C ..just average
If definitely better if you can get past the bitch, muthafucka, nigga nigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit nigga bitch, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitch, muthafucking, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka shit nigga, shit nigga bitch, shit nigga bitch, muthafucka, nigga nigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, shit nigga bitch,bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga, shit nigga bitch,muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitch, muthafucking muthafucka shit nigga, shit nigga bitch, muthafucka, nigga nigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitch, muthafucking muthafucka shit nigga, muthafucka, nigga nigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga, shit nigga bitch,muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, shit nigga bitch,bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit nigga shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking, bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitch, muthafucking, shit nigga bitch, muthafucka shit nigga bitch bitch bitch. shit nigga bitch fuck nigga. fuck bitch nigga.
I agree with everything you said except for the "sexy at times" uhmmm hell naw ...
And "great story teller"..she was all over the place..and when she got serious and tried to make a point it just didn't land..
When she came out she was waaay too fired up..like she had just done a whole 8 ball or something..I thought she was going to pass out..she was trying way to hard
But she did calm down in the second half and the old Monique kinda showed up
I give it a solid C ..just average
Have you heard Eddie Griffins stand up??If definitely better if you can get past the bitch, muthafucka, nigga nigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit nigga bitch, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitch, muthafucking, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka shit nigga, shit nigga bitch, shit nigga bitch, muthafucka, nigga nigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, shit nigga bitch,bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga, shit nigga bitch,muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitch, muthafucking muthafucka shit nigga, shit nigga bitch, muthafucka, nigga nigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitch, muthafucking muthafucka shit nigga, muthafucka, nigga nigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga, shit nigga bitch,muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, shit nigga bitch,bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit nigga shit nigga bitch,muthafucka, nigga muthafucking, bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitchnigga, bitch bitch bitch, shit, muthafucka, nigga muthafucking bitch, bitch shit fuck fuck shit, bitch, muthafucking, shit nigga bitch, muthafucka shit nigga bitch bitch bitch. shit nigga bitch fuck nigga. fuck bitch nigga.
Have you heard Eddie Griffins stand up??![]()
Pretty much spot on.
4 mins in and she had already said nigga..more than Dave has said I'm his last 4 specials lol
You noticed the badly edited crowd reactions?
They weren't laughing in sync to what Monique was saying.
Seriously...when has there ever been a criticism of a comedian cursing too much?
When have any of you dudes on bgol ever raised crudity and cussing as a point of criticism against a stand up comedian??
UNTIL NOW
You guys need to really examine why yall hate on this black woman but yall hold her to standard you don't literally don't hold anyone else who does what she do.
She stood her ground against cac execs as was her right and most of you sided with the cacs...
She said her value as a entertainer is higher than what Netflix offered (as have other blackand white female comedians) and yall told her to STFU.
She exposed Steve Harvey's and Lee Daniel's two faced hypocrisy..
And any wins she gets is acknowledged BEGRUDGINGLY.
She's submissive to her man (the thing yall say black women should be) and you call her nutty for it.
NOW she curses too much!
Yall hate on her the same way cacs hate on black people.
Just admit that if there's one thing black men can't stand is an overweight dark-skinned black woman with a strong personality.
Just admit that to yourselves and you'll feel better.
Yeah man it was weird, and when they did laugh I thought it was because they filtered cocaine through the air conditioning system.![]()
Shit was dry AF to me, personally, perhaps my expectations were too high. Thought i would laugh…at least once… she was overboard with it. Had she been touring with this set? Wonder if it was tweaked and rewritten… seems like a first draft or some shit. Yes, she’s always cursed but it wasn’t the point of her whole shtick, it was weird. The girl on comedy hype said “well Bernie cursed a ton” he sure did. But his inflections and enunciation was what made him so damn funny- he had wit, from this special Big Mo trying too hard
Shit was dry AF to me, personally, perhaps my expectations were too high. Thought i would laugh…at least once… she was overboard with it. Had she been touring with this set? Wonder if it was tweaked and rewritten… seems like a first draft or some shit. Yes, she’s always cursed but it wasn’t the point of her whole shtick, it was weird. The girl on comedy hype said “well Bernie cursed a ton” he sure did. But his inflections and enunciation was what made him so damn funny- he had wit, from this special Big Mo trying too hard
That's fine but no one made a thread about how he cussed or says nigga alot and that nigga says nigga ALOT. He actually puts nigga in between the syllables of a word one time....no reaction from bgol.^^^^
Eddie ain't funny either
Have you heard Eddie Griffins stand up??how bout katt Williams..that dude actually said nigga baby in reference to black infants
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Seriously...when has there ever been a criticism of a comedian cursing too much?
When have any of you dudes on bgol ever raised crudity and cussing as a point of criticism against a stand up comedian??
UNTIL NOW
You guys need to really examine why yall hate on this black woman but yall hold her to standard you don't literally don't hold anyone else who does what she do.
She stood her ground against cac execs as was her right and most of you sided with the cacs...
She said her value as a entertainer is higher than what Netflix offered (as have other blackand white female comedians) and yall told her to STFU.
She exposed Steve Harvey's and Lee Daniel's two faced hypocrisy..
And any wins she gets is acknowledged BEGRUDGINGLY.
She's submissive to her man (the thing yall say black women should be) and you call her nutty for it.
NOW she curses too much!
Yall hate on her the same way cacs hate on black people.
Just admit that if there's one thing black men can't stand is an overweight dark-skinned black woman with a strong personality.
Just admit that to yourselves and you'll feel better.
She said that he replied “me too!” I want other women too you fat lumpy lard ass mf!
That's fine but no one made a thread about how he cussed or says nigga alot and that nigga says nigga ALOT. He actually puts nigga in between the syllables of a word one time....no reaction from bgol.
So what's the big deal now?
BOOM! she talked and cursed the whole time without any punchlines. Every joke MUST have a premise, a set up and a punchline. I'm still waiting to see a punch line! And her set up were waaay too long!!!!!I understood perfectly of what you said, you're complaining about her cussing a lot, saying she can't complete a sentence without cussing every time.
Most comedian tell jokes with almost cussing every time word for word.
I don't have a problem with how a comedian produces their routine even if they cuss all night in every sentence they speak as long as their material is funny.
Audience liked her comedy routine which is all that matters.
I've watched some of it but not all of it and will watch the rest soon.
We?? You're the spokesman for bgol?We thought saying he was wack was sufficient.
We actually want to see Monique win so we are trying to give at least I am trying to give constructive criticism.
Did you read my previous response to you?
Cause I covered all this.