That should tell you how obvious it is if novices can see the writing has changedI love how so many people that have never taken a writing course are now experts on writing,
Do we need a degree in economics or political science to know if Trump is doing a good job?I love how so many people that have never taken a writing course are now experts on writing,
That should tell you how obvious it is that novices can see the writing has changed
Do you believe the writing has changed ?No, it means that people don’t know about setps and payoffs, not writing and characters on the nose, show don’t tell, the difference between internal and external motivations, etc have no idea what makes a good script. Just what they enjoy. Because they’re complaining about all the wrong things.
Do we need a degree in economics or political science to know if Trump is doing a good job?
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She said when her dragons are full grown.... she'd burn cities to the ground and take what is mine with fire and blood. Well she wasn't bluffing, Danerys and Drogon put in that work like Curry and Klay on a hot shooting night. Kings Landing may never be the same, here are my stretched out observations from Season 8 Episode 5 of Game of Thrones "The Bells"
- Targaryen heritage: flipping the coin, waking the dragon, be a dragon, etc.
- Varys acting Ned Stark like writing letters to the relm about true heir
- “She won’t eat” Khaleesi know the lil birds are BBD “poision”
- Jon arrives to Varys who says your girlfriend is crazy as cowshit
- Varys is the only one who sees truth
- Men decide where power resides ...whether or not they know it
- She is my queeeeeeen to be sings Jon
- Tyrion is a snitch…runteldat to Danerys
- Ya’ll all betrayed me …Jon, Sansa, Tyrion, Lebron, Varys, Beyonce, etc
- Dany looks so sick I thought Viserys was back
- When a woman has an event coming and her hairdresser cancels (or killed) she’s on edge
- Varys “I hear footsteps in the dark” and Young Obama arrives
- Varys is the first Kinko’s operation of Westeros …11 copies a day by hand
- Varys meets Judge Dredd Danerys on the cliffs of Dragonstone
- Tyrion confesses …Varys is sentenced
- Stealth Drogon? Where did he come from? He’s out here avoiding radar
- Charbroiled spider makes Jon wonder if Danerys is losing it
- Missendrei was into S&M… no wonder Young Obama is pissed
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- Jon ‘I forgot my Cialis” Snow refuses to console Danerys
- Danerys proving who’s the real Targaryen… 100% down for that incest.
- This is victory for Sansa …I should have burnt her ass about a week ago
- I don’t have love here. I only have fear.” - Danerys “Let it be fear.”
- If the ring bells call off attack Tyrion pleads
- Dany never looks at Tyrion ….her & Obama already have a plan.
- Wait for me outside city you’ll know when it’s time – Danerys subtle look towards Obama
- BTW Jamie been captured… setting Tyrion up for treason
- Still smuggling Davos ? …I need to keep my bloodline alive
- I’m Arya of Winterfell Bureau of Investigation …my assignment to kill Cersei
- Tyrion tries to speak broken Spanish to Unsullied guards
- Casterly Rock bottom boys reunite
- “You are the only one who didn't treat me like a monster. You were all I had."
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- Escape and go “Life of Pi” until they reach Pentos…?
- Cersei’s armies, citizens of KL and iron fleet prepare
- Closing the windows with duct tape is really not gonna help…it’s not hurricane season.
- Darth Hound and Arya enter the KL octagon
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- “I gotta golden ticket” Jamie Lannister is denied access to Willy Wonka’s red keep
- Slow jam version “Reign of Castamere plays
- Euron looking for a fly ball like Kirby Puckett….
- Drogon kamikaze dives straight down with sun behind him
- Drogon destroys the Iron fleet and boiling water for his human hot dogs later
- Young Obama at the gates banging mask off by Future
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- Gate explodes …golden company running like a water faucet.
- Troops at the border wall failed to stop the Dothraki/Unsullied caravan.
- Drogon was worth his weight in gold. The Golden Company wasn’t worth a gold dragon.
- Harry Strickland has entered the game…. Strickland has left the game via Obama
- Samwell Tarly killed more people than the Golden Company combined
- Dothraki running through Lannister army like prunes in your bowels
- Led by a literal spear chucker ...the immigrants began doing exactly what many KL conservatives feared.
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- One good shot? Cersei....Gargamel is like “shhhhit”
- Red keep never fallen Lannister’s will protect their queen… this denial is DEEP
- This is your plan Cersei …hope you can kill all the dragons?
- Both sides standoff in streets of KL… why is Davos sword unsheathed
- Davos is the guy on the football team who plays 40 minutes and has a clean jersey
- Drogon lands on a building …getting his 15 minute work break
- Lannister army says that ain’t Pete’s dragon we surrender
- The bells ring across the city…. all Danerys hears is “Rock the Bells”
- Danerys Stormborn hard as hell…. Burning up you city I don’t care who you tell
- That’s my daddy’s house ya’ll stole…. Someone’s gotta pay (citywide dracarys)
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- Brans vision of dragon flying over KL comes true
- Bran was allowed to stream the film "Attack on KL" a year early on Ravenflix... 2/5 stars
- Young Obama strikes with nothing but black rage…. thinking “they killed Michelle”
- Jon still knows nothing …. This fool is trying to stop the attack
- Tyrion deserves the No Bell Peace Prize...
- Cersei’s wine chalice breaks as she looks out window in denial
- UFC undercard fight airing free on FOX …Jamie vs. Euron on the beach
- Both fighters being cuckolded by Cersei decide to fight instead of going to Maury.
- The Golden Lion double pimp slap may end the fight!
- Drogon and Dany take aim at Red Keep ….knocking down towers like they’re Taliban
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- Gargamel it’s not safe here my Queen…. Smurfette has a dragon
- Maegor holdfast may be safer/ Maegor was the little brother of Aenys
- Mad King’s wildfire is blowing up ….he’s like that’s my lil girl from all 7 Hells
- This is Ned Starks fault. Robert Baratheon told him to kill Danerys in season one
- Arya and the Hound enter the Keep and “Sandor” convinces Arya to leave or she will die
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- Meanwhile Danerys sings Talking Heads “Burning Down the house"
- Danerys eat a Snickers… you’re acting craaaaaaazy
- Danerys has always had crazy white girl eyes like Kellyanne Conway
- Hound treats the Queensguard like Palpatine did Jedi masters
- It’s time for the UFC (Ultimate Feuding championship) main event
- Obey your queen ? Gargamel tossed like a salad at Whole Foods
- Cersei sneaks by like the piano player in Color Purple when Sofia got slapped
- Mountain doesn’t use his sword in first round
- Is that Anakin or King Kong Bundy ?
- Cersei beliefs and home is crumbling around her
- Map on ground is cracked where the north begins… *message*
- Jamie gets his fix & finds his twin ...that Cersei got him strung out
- The happiness of seeing Cersei brought Jamie’s hand back? …first Starbucks now this
- Mountain won’t die, swords, police shootings, cancer…. Nothing works
- This is Mankind vs. Undertaker all over again...hell in a cell
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- Arya in the KL streets witnessing the shock and awe of Drogon’s playoff performance
- KL citizens running like it’s a Black Friday sale @ Crownlands Wal-Mart
- Hound with the Goldberg spear for the win …skydives into the flames
- RIP Sandor Clegane, Prince of Poultry. You got your sweet revenge
- Jon puts his sword away …..yells fall back
- Jon has that moment when you realize your ex is crazy af
- Only things the bells did was hit Arya
- At this point Arya has more concussions than a NFL player
- The asbestos may kill Arya in a few years if she survives
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- Renly B warned against the rolling back regulations on the building codes in KL, sprinkler systems could have saved a lot of lives
- A trapped Cersei “I don’t want to die” …scared now?
- Jamie & Cersei trapped in a cave like red and boober on fraggle rock
- Cersei and Jaime “nothing matters” Lannister get Casterly Rocked
- Valonqar means lil brother ….or some drywall in high valaryan
- Tywin Lannister died on Father’s Day. Cersei Lannister died on Mother’s Day.
- Tormund is headed back to Winterfell after learning about Jamie’s death
- Dany went Cajun microwave on KL …she’s not good at Simcity
- Red Keep = Red Heap
- "The child who is not embraced by the village will burn it down to feel its warmth" - African proverb
- Next week is obviously infrastructure week in Kings Landing
- Where are first the KL responders? No firemen, cops or even paramaesters
- Rescue operations have begun to locate the missing, including Cersei Lannister
- Cersei last seen wearing a new red cape in a bay window ...waiting on a delivery from Uber Eats
- Arya didn’t kill anyone, didn’t rescue anyone, she just got ashy.... time for shea butter
- Behold a pale white horse and ….Arya rode him out of town
- Thousands dead and many more reported missing after the Lannister administration’s travel ban against Targaryens
- How do all those people who named their kids Danerys feel?
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Pretty good listen if you have the time. He speaks on the show putting the characters in the backseat in order to end the show.
Agreed. Because letting everyone go & accepting a ‘quick surrender’ from the Lannister Army is the very best way to ‘make an example’ out of your enemy AFTER you have decided to instill FEAR in them & all their grandkids.man yall are some Dany Stans......
"She was supposed to burn those kids.......its all about war."
FOH
Agreed. Because letting everyone go & accepting a ‘quick surrender’ from the Lannister Army is the very best way to ‘make an example’ out of your enemy AFTER you have decided to instill FEAR in them & all their grandkids.
Here’s you: “My enemies will fear me!!”
Your enemies: “Ok, Ok. We give up.”
You: “Aight. Cool. Now ya’ll better put some Respeck on my name... for not killing innocent Children.”
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Meanwhile, Here’s Dany: “So be it. I choose Fear.”
Her enemies: “Ok, Ok. We give up.”
“.... but it was not over. A quick surrender was only the beginning.... Without saying another word Drogon launches into the air... murdering every last man, woman & child in King’s Landing. THOUSANDS run for their lives. Only to be melted like candle wax upon the pavement stretching from the Red Keep all the way past Flea Bottom & beyond. For several hours, her Doomsday Dragon spews Fire & Molten Ash from the very pits of Hell... the Intense Smoke & Stifling Fumes turn the sky into a shade of ‘blood red’ color that brings out a Paralyzing Fear from the very soul of a man. Aye, the battle was over a long time ago. But victory was not the only one thing being sought on this day. This was not just pure rage. This was Conquest. In its most SAVAGE form. Some say their screams could be heard all the way in Volantis.
A message was being sent for Hundreds of GENERATIONS to come.... and would you like to know what that message was Mi Lord?” - the Old Nan asks the young boy.
While she had been speaking, she had stopped rocking in her chair by the window. Now her eyes fixed themselves silently & directly into this child’s gaze... as he slowly pulls the covers up to his neck.
“Now is this the type of scary story you want to hear Little Lord Stark?”
Aaaaannndd that pretty much sums up the whole difference between ‘what people wanted Dany to do in KL’ ... and what Dany herself ‘wanted people to REMEMBER about KL’.
Some folks can understand that ‘a quick surrender’ does not instill any FEAR into the generations to come.
Some folks can’t.
They stay mad for weeks because the Night King was not the Final Boss... and they didn’t see him in a 1v1 fight against Jon Snow
A story about ‘a quick surrender’ doesn’t get told ‘as a a reminder (or as a warning) decades later.
Some folks understand that, Bruh.
Some folks don’t.
Right, but nobody who was alive during that time is still around.We already know her descendants conquered Westeros with dragons.
Pretty good listen if you have the time. He speaks on the show putting the characters in the backseat in order to end the show.
Right, but nobody who was alive during that time is still around.
Folks in Westeros have a bad habit of calling shit Grumpkins & Snarks.
Fuckers heard Dany was coming with a Dragon and they all decided to ‘stick around’ to see how it was gonna play out.
So they got to ‘experience’ what getting Conquered by Dragons feels like.... firsthand.
She gave them exactly what they was looking for.![]()
True. We on the same page.First off...I agree with your premise....you sayin what I been sayin. But....I disagree with the notion that people decided to stick around and see how it plays out. Most of the people that live in KL are poor as fuck....not like they can afford to just pick up and go. The civilians she killed were likely some of the most vulnerable people in the 7 kingdoms which is why what she did was so devastating. At the same time, any of them that survive that are exactly the kind of people who will tell the story for generations, so again, I agree with your premise.
You said there was no dialog. That the script was 3 pages. Well, I just pointed out that episodes 1,2, and 4 were 3.5 hours of nothing but dialog. Now you’re moving the goalpost to the quality of the dialog. And if you were talking about quality from the beginning, why did you say the scripts were only 3 pages.
You’re just windmilling at this point.
I love how so many people that have never taken a writing course are now experts on writing,
True. We on the same page.
I’m just saying there were a lot of ‘able bodied’ poor citizens who could have walked right out the back gates of Kings Landing.... and got merely 5 minutes away... and never get burned to a crisp.
Being poor doesn’t mean you cannot walk a few steps OUTSIDE of Kings Landing and go stand on a hill, (or sit on the beach somewhere) for a few hours... and wait for all the mayhem to end.
That requires ZERO money.
Just common sense. And the ‘will’ to act.
Personally, I think If Stannis had taken King’s Landing during the Battle or Blackwater.... a lot of innocent ‘poor folks’ would have died a very violent death also... simply because they did not leave the area. They would have been killed too by Baratheon Soldiers ‘out for blood’. Just Not as many. But definitely HUNDREDS. Instead of THOUSANDS.
These folks had known for a loooong time that Dany brought some Dragons to Westeros... ever since season 7.... and they were STILL hanging out in the middle of the streets. Or running up into their houses like that shit was 100% Fireproof.
Even the hoes in the Whorehouses of KL who were fucking Bronn were sharing stories about the Lannister Soldiers (like Ed Sheeren) who got burnt to a crisp during the Loot Train attack... when Qyburn walked in and gave him that crossbow. So you know if the THOTS of Kings Landing knew “the threat was real”.... then lots of regular ‘poor folks’ knew it also... but stayed anyway. Isn’t that ‘making a decision’ to stay? Yes. It is, imo. Just saying.
(They literally saw a nucca with no eyebrows & no eyelids... asked him how it happened... he tells them “it got burnt off by Dragonfire. But fuck all that. That’s neither here nor there... how much for a half-n-half?”... and that information STILL wasn’t good enough to make a decision to leave.... they was like... “ok, I’m good right here. Next customer.” - lol)
“I’m not gonna be anywhere near Kings Landing when those fucking Dragons start spitting flames all over the place” - Bronn season 7 episode 5.
And all the ‘poor folks’ who shared his opinion were nowhere to be found when Dany went Ballistic.
Nah, they pressed their luck... and wanted to play both sides by thinking: “if Cersei wins... I’m good with that. Life goes on. Just like it was before. No biggie.”.... and at the same time they were thinking: “well if Dany wins, I’m good with that. I’ll just bend the knee, like everyone else. Life goes on. No biggie.”
They all learned ‘the hard way’ to get the fuck outta Dodge.... when it’s decimation time.
Because Arya was the only one who had someone (literally) grab her by the shirt collar and warn her: “If you stay here... you WILL Die. Make absolutely NO mistake about it. Run!!”![]()
True. We on the same page.
I’m just saying there were a lot of ‘able bodied’ poor citizens who could have walked right out the back gates of Kings Landing.... and got merely 5 minutes away... and never get burned to a crisp.
Being poor doesn’t mean you cannot walk a few steps OUTSIDE of Kings Landing and go stand on a hill, (or sit on the beach somewhere) for a few hours... and wait for all the mayhem to end.
That requires ZERO money.
Just common sense. And the ‘will’ to act.
Personally, I think If Stannis had taken King’s Landing during the Battle or Blackwater.... a lot of innocent ‘poor folks’ would have died a very violent death also... simply because they did not leave the area. They would have been killed too by Baratheon Soldiers ‘out for blood’. Just Not as many. But definitely HUNDREDS. Instead of THOUSANDS.
These folks had known for a loooong time that Dany brought some Dragons to Westeros... ever since season 7.... and they were STILL hanging out in the middle of the streets. Or running up into their houses like that shit was 100% Fireproof.
Even the hoes in the Whorehouses of KL who were fucking Bronn were sharing stories about the Lannister Soldiers (like Ed Sheeren) who got burnt to a crisp during the Loot Train attack... when Qyburn walked in and gave him that crossbow. So you know if the THOTS of Kings Landing knew “the threat was real”.... then lots of regular ‘poor folks’ knew it also... but stayed anyway. Isn’t that ‘making a decision’ to stay? Yes. It is, imo. Just saying.
(They literally saw a nucca with no eyebrows & no eyelids... asked him how it happened... he tells them “it got burnt off by Dragonfire. But fuck all that. That’s neither here nor there... how much for a half-n-half?”... and that information STILL wasn’t good enough to make a decision to leave.... they was like... “ok, I’m good right here. Next customer.” - lol)
“I’m not gonna be anywhere near Kings Landing when those fucking Dragons start spitting flames all over the place” - Bronn season 7 episode 5.
And all the ‘poor folks’ who shared his opinion were nowhere to be found when Dany went Ballistic.
Nah, they pressed their luck... and wanted to play both sides by thinking: “if Cersei wins... I’m good with that. Life goes on. Just like it was before. No biggie.”.... and at the same time they were thinking: “well if Dany wins, I’m good with that. I’ll just bend the knee, like everyone else. Life goes on. No biggie.”
They all learned ‘the hard way’ to get the fuck outta Dodge.... when it’s decimation time.
Because Arya was the only one who had someone (literally) grab her by the shirt collar and warn her: “If you stay here... you WILL Die. Make absolutely NO mistake about it. Run!!”![]()
I feel you on the strolling right outside the gates. I think its probly more to do with what Tyrion said....most of those people dont give a damn who sits on the throne. All the talk of politics and dragons is some bs til your crib is on fire I guess. lol
^^^ Exactly.Even in present day when ISIS or US Armed forces come to town in Syria and other places the people don't leave. Them idiots don't live till everything bombed then be like we refugees let us in. Shit happens in Africa all the time when so called rebel forces come through.
^^^ Exactly.They learn the hard way.
I wonder how many of them “make the same mistake (2x) twice”?![]()
Sorry I mean good and meaningful dialogue. Not “a dragon eats whatever it wants”.
I really assumed people knew what I meant by now. I have been posting non stop about my thoughts about that bad fucking writing and lack of dialogue.
What do you want from me??? Shit!!!!!!
I still kinda take issue with that perspective. It aint like the people in Flea Bottom got Varys in they ear giving them the low down. They dont really know whats what. Their lives dont change for the most part when the ruler changes. I mean...it did with Cersei cuz she blew up the neighborhood park.....and this is definitely some climate change shit for them.....but I wouldnt think they are informed enough to make decisions like that at a high level.
btw who ever wins still owes the iron bank that money.
I have. Have you? What is your point. People can’t have an opinion and know when something is bad. You don’t need to know how to write to know writing is bad.
I have. Have you? What is your point. People can’t have an opinion and know when something is bad. You don’t need to know how to write to know writing is bad.
I kinda think they do (or did) know what’s what. But I think lots of them have (or had) the same attitude as Cersei does.... toward Dany... because they consider her “a foreign invader who is coming to kill them & rape their women.” (Just like Cersie and their Noble Lords think.)I still kinda take issue with that perspective. It aint like the people in Flea Bottom got Varys in they ear giving them the low down. They dont really know whats what. Their lives dont change for the most part when the ruler changes. I mean...it did with Cersei cuz she blew up the neighborhood park.....and this is definitely some climate change shit for them.....but I wouldnt think they are informed enough to make decisions like that at a high level.
I don't think you're seeing the forrest for the treesYes I have.
And writing theory tells you that everyone is two people instead of one.
You are who you see yourself as.
And you are who you actually are.
The two are almost never the same.
A character’s actions should always be an attempt to be the person that character sees herself as i.e. “breaker of chains”
But in the end the person will always find themselves doing things that reinforce the reality of who they actually are i.e. “burning of king’s landing”
That’s character depth and allows a more interesting arc.
So along the way you see the writers showing both Daenerys’s. The one she wants to/sees herself as - freeing slaves, stopping people from being raped, locking up drogon for the death of a child..
And the one she actually is - crucifying dozens, burning any that defy her, demanding the bending of the knee.
In the end she burned the city to keep her enemies at bay by fear of burning, not because she snapped, but because that’s who she always actually was and not the person she saw herself as and or wanted to be.
I took a writing class where we discussed this duality. And you see the writers carry this out throughout the series then people who have no clue about writing theory or why the writers made that decision say that’s “bad writing” because they didn’t agree or didn’t enjoy it.
This duality is summed up perfectly by Jules in pulp fiction;
"The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the inequities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he who, in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of the darkness. For he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know I am the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon you." I been sayin' that shit for years. And if you ever heard it, it meant your ass. I never really questioned what it meant. I thought it was just a cold-blooded thing to say to a motherfucker before you popped a cap in his ass. But I saw some shit this mornin' made me think twice. Now I'm thinkin': it could mean you're the evil man. And I'm the righteous man. And Mr. .45 here, he's the shepherd protecting my righteous ass in the valley of darkness. Or it could be you're the righteous man and I'm the shepherd and it's the world that's evil and selfish. I'd like that. But that shit ain't the truth. The truth is you're the weak. And I'm the tyranny of evil men. But I'm tryin, Ringo. I'm tryin' real hard to be the shepherd.”
^^^ This is an epic explanation. Salute.Yes I have.
And writing theory tells you that everyone is two people instead of one.
You are who you see yourself as.
And you are who you actually are.
The two are almost never the same.
A character’s actions should always be an attempt to be the person that character sees herself as i.e. “breaker of chains”
But in the end the person will always find themselves doing things that reinforce the reality of who they actually are i.e. “burning of king’s landing”
That’s character depth and allows a more interesting arc.
So along the way you see the writers showing both Daenerys’s. The one she wants to/sees herself as - freeing slaves, stopping people from being raped, locking up drogon for the death of a child..
And the one she actually is - crucifying dozens, burning any that defy her, demanding the bending of the knee.
In the end she burned the city to keep her enemies at bay by fear of burning, not because she snapped, but because that’s who she always actually was and not the person she saw herself as and or wanted to be.
I took a writing class where we discussed this duality. And you see the writers carry this out throughout the series then people who have no clue about writing theory or why the writers made that decision say that’s “bad writing” because they didn’t agree or didn’t enjoy it.
This duality is summed up perfectly by Jules in pulp fiction;
"The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the inequities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he who, in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of the darkness. For he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know I am the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon you." I been sayin' that shit for years. And if you ever heard it, it meant your ass. I never really questioned what it meant. I thought it was just a cold-blooded thing to say to a motherfucker before you popped a cap in his ass. But I saw some shit this mornin' made me think twice. Now I'm thinkin': it could mean you're the evil man. And I'm the righteous man. And Mr. .45 here, he's the shepherd protecting my righteous ass in the valley of darkness. Or it could be you're the righteous man and I'm the shepherd and it's the world that's evil and selfish. I'd like that. But that shit ain't the truth. The truth is you're the weak. And I'm the tyranny of evil men. But I'm tryin, Ringo. I'm tryin' real hard to be the shepherd.”